The critique was great learning. Mark has an amazing ability to isolate what is not working in each piece. Even good paintings often have problem spots, and one of the hardest things is identifying them (fixing the problem is often relatively easy).
The thing that really struck me in the feedback to my photos was what Mark said about pictures like this one:
Snowfall, Kyoto
February 2005
Digital
He said that the pictures are "crying out for silver" - meaning they would look really good printed with the traditional analog process.
I took the picture in 2005, and did not start learning silver gelatin printing until about a year ago, in 2012. When I did, one reason was that I could not get my digital pictures to print satisfactorily with inkjet printers. It amazes me that, it took Mark 10 minutes to understand what had taken me seven years. Seven years are a long time (yes: life is short, and the craft difficult).
There are cases in which we have an idea in mind of what a painting is supposed to look like, and to try and paint it, we ignore the much better painting that is trying to happen on the canvas. This has happened to me many times as a beginner. Going slow and looking at things for what they are is a useful life lesson I have learned from painting (and Mark was the one who pointed this out to me).
In this case, however, I think I was just ignorant. I have had limited exposure to photography, and I am ignorant of technique. I just had no idea certain things were out there and I could use them.






